Seen outside the train window, oddly enough, on Hudson River. (Sorry for window streak.)
Grey On/In Grey
Posted February 12, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: elephants, Uncategorized
Tags: elephants on Hudson, grey on grey, manicddaily, metro north Hudson line, seen on Hudson
Not Quite Breugel
Posted February 11, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: elephants
Tags: manicddaily, northern landscape with elephants, not quite Bruegel landscape, ski for me
Under Milk Weed–Snow Spores
Posted February 10, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: Country weekend, Uncategorized
Tags: manicddaily, milkweed in snow, photos of milk weed in snow, snow spores
Frozen On A Slope Too Steep
Posted February 9, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: poetry, Uncategorized
Tags: "cascade" poem, fear of skiing poem, fun day on the slopes! poem, manicddaily, mother-daughter poem, snowplow no-go poem, what we don't talk about when we talk about skiing
Frozen On Skis and A Slope Too Steep
(At the Urging of My Daughter)
“I hate you, I hate you,” I said
to my own child, who (wincingly) smiled.
“Just take the turn slowly,” she led
in a perfect and slow-motion wedge.
But in my starts, my tight pace undialed–
“I hate you, I hate you,” I said.
Beside us, snowboarders slip-sped
and skiers spit skid-curves of wild
at my child, who so wincingly smiled,
while I, cryogenically dead,
stuck fast to stilled tilt. She beguiled,
“just take the turn slowly,” and led.
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I am not a good or experienced skier, and have a fair amount of fear of steep slopes, in part because I hate the loss of control I feel when going fast. So, here’s a poem both for the dVerse Poets prompt, hosted by Claudia Schoenfeld, to write about letting go, and a Real Toads prompt, hosted by Hedgewitch (Joy Ann Jones) to write a “cascade” poem, that is, one with a repeated line scheme. I’m not sure that I’ve met either challenge very successfully, but I did get to the bottom of the hill. (For more on either prompt, or the cascade form, check out the sites above.)
Further note, I would never have thought that I would ever be capable of saying such words to a child and both she and I were a bit shocked. I guess it is wrong to label what steep slopes inspire in me as a “fair amount” of fear. (I am okay on easy slopes and she and I really do get along quite well. She’s just a much better skier who’s learned that it’s best not to ask me to keep her company to higher heights!)
No more lingering in Tarrytown–make that NYC– Friday Flash 55
Posted February 8, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: poetry, Uncategorized
Tags: commuting couple, Friday Flash 55, G-Man Mr. Knowitall, long distance relationship poem, manicddaily, snowstorm poem
Long-distance Couple Faces Snowstorm
Communication blown pre-storm:
Who needs to do
What, where, when, and why all
Possibilities are impossible (later,
What we should have done) rustles wayward
Like readying wind, but when
Prospect of being snowed-in alone is truly
Aired-you there, me here– crystally mistily
Clear–I run to the next train,
You speed to meet it.
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55 rushed words on the train posted from iPhone for the g-man. http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com
Go tell him I am hoping to beat the storm!
February (Grandmother)
Posted February 7, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: children's illustration, poetry, Uncategorized
Tags: February as grey as stark white hair, grandmothers and February, illustrated poem re grandmother, manicddaily, memoir poem, poem for grandmother
Below is a little illustrated story I wrote about one of my grandmothers some time ago that I am posting for a dVerse Poets Pub, memoir prompt, hosted by Victoria C. Slotto. I’m sorry the pics are so bad; clearer versions can be found here (where you can see as a slide show). I’ve typed out the text below.
February was a month my grandmother just couldn’t take anymore. She would look out the window and wish away grey.
Sometimes she had a little dog. She wasn’t supposed to have a little dog but she’d make up some excuse.
She loved to look at it perk up by the window. The one I remember had a sharp little tail, perked by definition.
Sometimes, in February, she’d get sick, and we would fly out there, then drive. The hospital was a long straight road away in Minnesota, a curvy one in Iowa.
I watched the shoulders. The twists in Iowa came out of nowhere and the road was edged by a sudden sassy lip like the ones that tortured teacher. My mother was a teacher, and every time we skidded across that gravelly edge she cursed all Republicans who, in her mind, refused to pay for public works.
One February, my grandmother got sick in Washington, D.C., my hometown. She had the most beautiful stark white hair.
I was very brave decisive. Seeing that the hospital stay convinced my grandmother that she was about to die, I got my mom to take her out. Against doctors’ orders.
The next day she was so much better she jumped from bed to a little portable potty then ate a big breakfast, smiling as she stole secret spoonfuls of jam, a sure sign that life will go on.
One February sometime later, she came to me on a school bus. I was careful not to tell her she had died. So fearful was I that she would leave again, I did not speak to her at all.
I sat in a place she might not see, tears streaming. Her cloud of stark white hair looked almost solid.
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(I might edit the text if I were redoing today, but it’s written on the pics.) All art is original; all rights reserved.
“Going to Ground”
Posted February 5, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: poetry, Uncategorized
Tags: after unkindness, manicddaily, sonnet, sound of a sleeve sonnet, walk in snowy field sonnet, what we talk about when we reproach ourselves poem
Going to Ground
And then there are those times when you follow
ground rather than sky, spying your way
by clump, not star, tufted mound, found hollow
in a hill. You’ve not been kind, and as day
falls, and night falls too (from your perspective),
you want to weep, but can only walk,
cross snow-swept field, unable to relive
what you didn’t rightly live when the clock
wound round first go. As coat sleeve side-slides,
yaps sound, a wild chorus, and not distant,
though muted in dim. Your startled heart invites
in fear to replace remorse, but, next instant,
recognizes the whine of rubbed nylon.
You walk, arms behind back now, head still down.
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A sort of a sonnet, with slant rhyme and shifting pentameter, for dVerse Poets Open Link Night.
Light Sculpture (Jason Martin)
Posted February 4, 2013 by ManicDdailyCategories: LIght Sculpture, Uncategorized
Tags: Jason Martin, Jason Martin light sculpture, manicddaily, peacock light, sculpture made with light, the sculpture with kaleidoscope eyes


























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