Archive for 2011

Fridays Flash 55 (“Did you hear the one about the father, the daughter, and the….?”

October 21, 2011

Overheard in NYC 

Man, dark curls pulled back below
balance of thick black hat,
breaks from gentling lilt of
tuneful (if slightly breathless) Hebrew song,
to child, blonde curls falling forward,
anxious (despite song),
in his fully-extended arms (and pink), wedged
between careful pale-
fingered grasp and
trapezoidal cardboard box:
“Don’t worry, sweetie, we’ve got
the ukelele.”

(This is posted for Friday Flash 55 (Flash Fiction in 55 words), a fun excercise posted by the G-Man, Mr. Know=it-all.   (I’m going to tell him a thing or two.)

Apologies to regular followers:it’s the reposting of an earlier (not great) drawing, and story, though slightly expanded here.

Shaped Poetry? Gulp. “The Sweater Swallows”

October 20, 2011

I first posted this for the DVerse Poets Pub “form for all” challenge, hosted by Gay Reiser Cannon, of making a “Shaped” or “Concrete Poem,” and now I am linking to Poetry Rally.

 Agh. For me, making a concrete poem feels like hitting my head against a wall. (I’m just not a concrete kind of gal.) I should try it for exactly that reason, I suppose, but instead I’ve opted for more of an illustrated poem. (Yes, it’s a bit silly. I am, I guess, a silly kind of a gal.)

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Occupying a Very Wet Wall Street

October 19, 2011

J. Seward Johnson Sculpture "Double-Check" Bronze Businessman Under Cover (With Papier Mache Megaphone Behind--There is no permit for real megaphone at the park.)

Those in Zuccotti Park, down on Wall Street, were occupied by the very difficult task of staying dry today.  Heavy rain all day, and these guys don’t really have tents so much as tarps layered over sleeping bags.  These conditions seen particularly difficult for a movement which seems in part to have generated whatever general respect it has garnered simply through its staying power.

Occupiers seemed pretty cheerful this morning.  (When I commented walking by on the awful weather, one made the joke that it enabled them to offer free bottles of water.)

This evening looked miserable though.  Occupiers were performing regular human mike duties (the group repeats whatever the main speaker says to make up for lack of amplified sound) but all sleeping gear looked absolutely drenched.  Also no drumming to speak of.

Best light held by cameramen

Zero tolerance for illegal activities rules (sign shot in rain.)

Umbrella propped sideways to cover entrance to tarp-covered area.

Taboo/Provocative Sonnet? (“Spy Games” )

October 18, 2011

One of my (many) faults is a tendency to second guess myself.  In the world of online poetry sites, this tends to arise in the context of ‘why did I post that poem, link, story, or picture?’ when I should have posted a completely different one.  (The different one, of course, would have been much more cool, likeable, wowie-zowie.)

This past weekend, dVerse Poets Pub, a wonderful online poetry site, urged poets to post something taboo or provocative.  Needless to say, I spent all weekend castigating myself for the poem I put up (about an important seaside activity.)

So, here it’s Tuesday, dVerse Poets “open link” night, and instead of moving on, I’m going to post another “taboo” poem, a sonnet, in, I think, a Spenserian format.   I am also posting this poem for the Poetry Palace’s poetry rally.  Here goes:

Spy Games

We played spy games galore in the basement.
Running spy games with the boys, our bent hands
guns, till sweating we lay down on cold cement,
shirts pulled up, chests hard.  Not much withstands
the leaching chill of earth, the buried sands
beneath a downstairs’ room, except perhaps
the burn of nipple, the future woman’s
breasts.  Our spy games just for girls had traps—
some of us played femmes fatales, poor saps,
while the leader girl was Bond—0-0-7.
She hung us ropeless from the bathroom taps,
then tortured us in ways that felt like heaven,
the basement bed our rack, what spies we were,
confessing neither to ourselves nor her.


The poem is published in Going On Somewhere.  (The header is a detail from the cover by Jason Martin.)  Check it out!

Monday Evening in Zuccotti Park (Walking By “Occupying Wall Street”)

October 17, 2011

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Evening falls early and quite cold in Zuccotti Park. At the bottom, a yogi type was instructing a group (sitting) in some kind of relaxing breathing exercise. Everyone seemed pretty relaxed.

Monday Morning in Zuccotti Park (“Occupy Wall Street”) In Dappled Pix

October 17, 2011

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Wall Street Area – Very Much Occupied

October 16, 2011

South Side Zuccotti Park

Downtown NYC was very much occupied today.

I live to the West, so I first came to the entrance of  the new visitors center at the old WTC.  (Ground Zero to those who are not long-time New Yorkers.)  This seems to have become one of the most popular tourist destinations in the City, with perpetual lines waiting to gain entrance to the walled-in Memorial Garden. The tourists, whether from Japan or Kansas, almost all have a certain look–scrubbed skin, khaki on some part of their body, and hats (often of the small bucket variety).

Then, I arrived at Occupy Wall Street.  Zuccotti Square has become increasing crowded over the last few weeks, and sports an increased sense of good cheer.   There seems also to be a much greater variety of people–a significantly higher percentage of middle-aged folks to dredlocks.  (I’m not complaining about the dreds, just commenting.)  Occupiers also have a certain look, but it is different from the tourist look.  Rumpled.  (The park is not a comfortable place to stay.)

Today, the complexity of the scene was magnified because there were not only tourists,  occupiers, gawkers, construction workers,press and police–there were also the Lubavitchers!  Those proselytizing in vans highlighting Succoth.   They were dressed in Hasidic gear with wide-brimmed black hats (as opposed to the buckets) and several held large stalks of grain.

(This at Zuccotti Park)

(This one at Memorial Garden.)

And then (exciting!), we happened onto Jon Oliver, musing to the side of the park across the street.  “Hey Jon!” I found myself calling and then felt surprised (and almost hurt) that he didn’t call back.  (It is odd to think that someone can look so familiar and not know you at all.)   We did speak very briefly  and  I would note that he seemed much better looking in person than on TV, and was extremely gracious.

Later, I saw some occupiers escaping over to my side of the West Side Highway.  My guess is that the grass of Hudson River Park is a lot more comfortable for napping than Zuccotti’s concrete.

(Hard to See - People Napping on Napsacks.)

“Magpie Tales” – Ping and Less Ping.

October 16, 2011

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In my ongoing exploration of online writing and poetry sites, I am participating today in Magpie Tales, a site, hosted by Tess Kincaid, that sets up an interesting picture prompt. The picture was a photograph of skewered ducks hanging in a Chinese restaurant, before a slightly smiling cook. (I like to use my own art work where possible so have done my own copy of it above.)

Here’s the poem:

At a Restaurant On Mott

There is something about the Chinese,
at least when it comes to
restaurants, that does not consider
Ping (the little white duck
of my childhood who wafted
paper-lantern-like down an
unscrolled Yangtze river, among
junks of pen, ink, watercolor.)

There is something that smiles
as wide as a ladle, that
gleams with anticipatory,
and unmitigated,
satisfaction
at the sight, for example, of a chicken’s foot
streaming with small galaxies
of golden globules.

There is something that doggedly
digests the dog-eat-dogness of this
world in a way that the limp cartilage of
my vegetarian fingers simply cannot grasp;
a realism as rooted as
galic/ginger/turnips/webbed feet/hooves,
which my Ping-popping
anemia could probably profit from.

Nonetheless, I’ll stick to the tofu.

Taboo? (Maybe…) Poem (Yes!) (“A Woman Needing to Pee”)

October 15, 2011

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The below poem is posted as part of dVerse Poets Pub, Saturday Poetics prompt, hosted today by Kellie Elmore. The prompt was for a poem that is provocative or deals with a subject that’s taboo.  As a (believe it or not!) slightly shy person, I find it very hard to post something both new and taboo, so am posting an older poem (one, that I’ve had time to get used to.)

A Woman Needing to Pee

A woman needing to pee,
she steps into the sea, knees
salt, a piercing balm, her
shaved legs grimace, gasp
cold, still she strolls thighward,
as far as she is able, needing to pee,
squats needing to hide it,
rubs water over her arms to hide it better,
acting out a woman too timid
to go out far, a woman
needing to cool herself.  But
she craves warmth and secretes it,
a secret warmth, wet-warming
all the sea.

Stretching tall
and cold now only where air
licks skin, she dives
into the afterglow,
a woman who swims.

A little background:  the poem was originally written as part of a “magnetic poetry exercise,” a kind of arbitrary but freeing exercise.  It can be found in my first book of poetry, Going on Somewhere, poems by Karin Gustafson, pictures by Diana Barco, cover by Jason Martin.  Check it out!

(PS – the new header above is from the cover of Going on Somewhere,  by Jason Martin.)

Flash Friday 55 – Short Short – (Teacher?)

October 13, 2011

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As part of my (kind of random!) exploration of online poetry and prose sites, I am making my first Flash Friday 55 post, which is a post somehow indelibly connected to the G Man, Mr. Know-it=all, and involves the writing of a 55 word story.

Teacher?

When they were good, she let them
color around the Bible verses they’d
copied out.

When they were bad, she had them
stand before the class, and
slap themselves, exhorting as they lapsed
(second graders get tired),
“harder, harder.”

A God-fearing woman, she felt
called to teach them much; the fear part,
they learned.