Posted tagged ‘teen poem’

“Beneath It All”

August 11, 2009

For those of you (especially those who know me) who really don’t get all this Pattinson stuff (and forget that I write teen novels), I’m posting a poem.   This was not an exercise poem, sort of a teen poem, or early teen.

Beneath it all

Beneath the red over blue sky,
she walked a beam, its wood dark
as charcoal;  just below it, gravel.  Still,
she held arms out
to her sides
as if balancing on a narrow ledge, in
a harsh wind,
pretending.  Pretending too
that she was still a little girl, while
also pretending
to be older.  To be younger
and older both
felt cute,
like wearing,with conscious insouciance,
a too-short skirt over legs
that had learned allure.
Sure of the man watching, she also
pretended to slip, then
caught herself, smiling in mock
relief, the feel of control surging through her
like growth itself.
She had much to learn and
would have a hard time at it.

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Beneath it all

Beneath the red over blue sky,

she walked a beam, its wood dark

as charcoal; just below it, gravel. Still,

she held arms out

to her sides

as if balancing on a narrow ledge, in

a harsh wind,

pretending. Pretending too

that she was still a little girl, while

also pretending

to be older. Younger

and older both

felt cute,

like wearing,

with conscious insouciance,

a too-short skirt over legs

that had learned allure.

Sure of the man watching, she also

pretended to slip, then

caught herself, smiling in mock

relief, the feel of control surging through her

like growth itself.

She had much to learn and

would have a hard time at it.