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Archive for October 2011
Occupying Wall Street looks hard in the A.M.
October 26, 2011Occupy Wall Street – Zuccotti Park – Monday Night (10/25)
October 26, 2011It’s getting dark early and cold in Zuccotti Park, the site in the New York Financial District where Wall Street is occupied.
I have to confess that, as a rule, I don’t watch television news, but my sense is that the protestors are being painted by some channels (i.e. Fox) as a scurrilous bunch. I walk through the park daily and they frankly seem a fairly studious bunch–there’s a whole lot of computing going on, as well as sitting, talking, and checking out pamphlets, magazines and books at a corner devoted to a library.
In the evening, because there is no megaphone, the crowd repeats the speaker’s words for amplification. Walking by, they actually sound something like a congregation in a church, repeating a creed or prayer. The voices are that somber.
Here are some pictures from last night–the library center, those standing and listening to speeches, the food line. (Sorry, I don’t have a great camera, and I’m really just a passer-by.)
“Here, Body” (The Body Is Not Your Good Dog.)
October 25, 2011I’m sorry. There is an incurable goofiness about some of my drawings. I did this one (based on Leonardo) for the recently revised poem below. It is quite a serious poem and not really much about dogs, so forgive me for being misleading.
The poem is being posted for dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night (Tuesdays) hosted by the wonderfully generous (and thankfully, humorous) Brian Miller.
Here, Body
The body is not your good dog.
It may sit, lie down, roll over,
but there’s a limit to its Rover
aspect. No spank
will keep it from
accident; no leash
train it to the right; no yank
make it heel
feelings.
You tell it what to want, but
it will vaunt
its fleshly, furry ways,
sneaking food when already fed;
taking up all the room on the bed;
whiffing what should not be sniffed;
its passion aimed at but a toy–
here, girl; here, boy–
that can never love it back.
It will decay
though you say stay. Still,
you will love it,
this not-good dog;
for even as you scold and cajole,
call,
and despair
of calling,
you will find yourself
cradling it;
you will find yourself
in its arms.
Magpie Tales – “Oncoming” (Sonnet)
October 23, 2011This is a sonnet I revised in connection with the weekly prompt of the “Magpie Tales” blog, hosted by Tess Kincaid. Tess posted a great photo of a city street, seen both from a car and in a car’s rear view mirror, but I have re-drawn the picture (above) to fit a little closer to my poem. (Still, not a true fit, sorry!)
Oncoming
There were one, two, three, four, trucks and we’d hit
sparks, some devilish configuration
of torque and stone, radii and slip,
that spit the car from its lane as from
the sea, only to buck and plunge it through
the waves of semis; to the right, the poles
of overpass pulled us to some untrue
North, as if to catch whatever souls
the trucks might miss. We were on a visit
to a grandmother, but I can’t recall
a later meal or kiss, only that minute
on the road there, the unreeling miss and haul
of grill, glass flashing glass, my father’s swerves–
the way space looks, time feels, when fate uncurls.
Poem by The Other? (who wants some cheese.)
October 22, 2011dVerse Poets Pub, a wonderfully supportive website for online poets, has a poetics prompt today about writing in the voice of the other (hosted by Mark Kerstetter). I have one very serious poem written from a very different perspective (the poem’s called Honor Killing.) But the world is such a somber place these days, I wanted to focus on something lighter, i.e. a dog! And cheese!
So here’s the poem. And below is a little fledgling animation I did some time ago which does not exactly illustrate the poem, but is close enough. (Have a great and light Saturday!)
Sniff Becomes Him
Sniff cheese sniff cheese sniff cheese above,
Sniff that pungent sniff I love.
Sniff high faint clouds of that so dear–
Sniff cheese so far and yet so near.
Sniff bowl, oh holy hallowed
Bowl, sniff (howl howl) bowl, so hollowed
Now. Oh please Oh please
Oh please, Oh please!
Oh wherefore art thou
Phantom cheese?
Sniff time not passing,
(Swiss, Cheddar, Brie?)
Sniff hours harassing,
(Oh my! Oh me!)
A Treat! (for Pete’s sake!)
For him who’ll wait
By door and bedside
Early, late.
Oh whimper/whine, I’ll beg no more,
If you’ll just drop some on the floor.
Egads! Yum Yum! My thanks for this,
Sweet morsel of a moment’s bliss.
(Repeat till satisfied.)
Shaped Poetry? Gulp. “The Sweater Swallows”
October 20, 2011I first posted this for the DVerse Poets Pub “form for all” challenge, hosted by Gay Reiser Cannon, of making a “Shaped” or “Concrete Poem,” and now I am linking to Poetry Rally.
Agh. For me, making a concrete poem feels like hitting my head against a wall. (I’m just not a concrete kind of gal.) I should try it for exactly that reason, I suppose, but instead I’ve opted for more of an illustrated poem. (Yes, it’s a bit silly. I am, I guess, a silly kind of a gal.)
Taboo/Provocative Sonnet? (“Spy Games” )
October 18, 2011One of my (many) faults is a tendency to second guess myself. In the world of online poetry sites, this tends to arise in the context of ‘why did I post that poem, link, story, or picture?’ when I should have posted a completely different one. (The different one, of course, would have been much more cool, likeable, wowie-zowie.)
This past weekend, dVerse Poets Pub, a wonderful online poetry site, urged poets to post something taboo or provocative. Needless to say, I spent all weekend castigating myself for the poem I put up (about an important seaside activity.)
So, here it’s Tuesday, dVerse Poets “open link” night, and instead of moving on, I’m going to post another “taboo” poem, a sonnet, in, I think, a Spenserian format. I am also posting this poem for the Poetry Palace’s poetry rally. Here goes:
Spy Games
We played spy games galore in the basement.
Running spy games with the boys, our bent hands
guns, till sweating we lay down on cold cement,
shirts pulled up, chests hard. Not much withstands
the leaching chill of earth, the buried sands
beneath a downstairs’ room, except perhaps
the burn of nipple, the future woman’s
breasts. Our spy games just for girls had traps—
some of us played femmes fatales, poor saps,
while the leader girl was Bond—0-0-7.
She hung us ropeless from the bathroom taps,
then tortured us in ways that felt like heaven,
the basement bed our rack, what spies we were,
confessing neither to ourselves nor her.
The poem is published in Going On Somewhere. (The header is a detail from the cover by Jason Martin.) Check it out!

























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