So I thought it was too hot today to write a new poem, even for the lovely prompt above posted by Tess Kincaid of MagPie Tales and that I would re-post an older poem with (ta-da!) my first internet audio recording. Needless to say, the recording has required far more time (and maybe even heat) then expected, and is still very much in the trial and error phase.
But , if you’ve got a moment on this hot day – give it a listen. (It’s a bit slow at the beginning but speeds up very quickly.) More importantly, it illustrates punctuation at work! (As a tool against line and stanza breaks.) To listen, just click.
“Swimming in Summer” (Karin Gustafson)
Swimming in Summer
Our palms grew pale as paws in northern climes
as water soaked right through our outer skin.
In summers past, how brightly water shines,
its surface sparked by countless solar mimes,
an aurora only fragmented by limb.
Our palms grew pale as paws in northern climes
as we played hide and seek with sunken dimes,
diving beneath the waves of echoed din;
in summers past, how brightly water shines.
My mother sat at poolside with the Times’
Sunday magazine; I swam by her shin,
my palms as pale as paws in northern climes,
sculpting her ivory leg, the only signs
of life the hair strands barely there, so prim
in summers past. How brightly water shines
in that lost pool; and all that filled our minds
frozen now, the glimmer petrified within
palms, grown pale as paws in northern climes.
In summers past, how brightly water shines.
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The poem, btw, is in my book of poetry, Going on Somewhere. Check it out or also Children’s counting book 1 Mississippi -for lovers of rivers, light and pachyderms, or Nose Dive, a very fun novel that is perfect for a pool or beachside escape.
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