I am diabolically busy this week, so am combining my response to two wonderful online prompts: Magpie Tales, hosted by Tess Kincaid, and dVerse Poets Pub open link night. (The above is my rendering of Tess’s photographic prompt, its mood slightly offered and the “rice” more or less gone) I urge you to check out both sites.
And here’s the poem, with a cautionary note that the language is more “adult” than typically posted here, i.e. stop right now if you don’t like that sort of thing.
Ophelia, Ophelia Syndrome
Girl’s beast heart, age ten, swims sky,
arms swinging wings, she springs
till body turns spy—
Where does complete go?
Drips from woman’s breast, ass, thigh.
She loves pining, the yearn,
craves the kiss, lick, fuck,
finds contempt, klutz lust, mucks
about in briny shyness.
Making boy-man God-king
slits wings. Rubs a zipper
into her skin to mend it,
hoards opalescence.
Further notes–the poem was inspired from a discussion, popular a few years back, about many girls’ loss of confidence at a certain age. It was actually written as part of a “magnetic poetry” exercise (for a party), in which only words on a specific list could be used. For those interested in the mechanics of prompts and the wayward mind, the other poem I wrote from that same list deals with peeing in the ocean. (Both poems are in Going on Somewhere, available on Amazon.)
(I am also postinf this for Jingle poetry picnic on http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com.)

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