“Spined” – Flash Fiction 55

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Spined

The sweetest part, he said, jamming the core across her clenched lips/teeth; I’m telling you to try it, and, when she stuck out her tongue, slapped her.

You’re only hurting yourself.

As she tasted sting over blood, even over pineapple, she couldn’t quite believe that, and would not, she swore, even if she could.

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Yes, I know this is both a bummer and a bit out of character, and I almost hate to tell it to the G-Man because I like Fridays to be more cheerful, but it is 55 words, and part of a larger story, and well, all I could come up with today.

DO have a nice weekend! (And sorry, and thanks.)

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11 Comments on ““Spined” – Flash Fiction 55”

  1. janehewey Says:

    you are so kind to apologize.
    this is effective writing, K.

  2. Linc Says:

    I can’t decide how I feel about this, but it sure elicits some potent emotions. Well done!

  3. happygirl Says:

    This one suits me just fine. I think we may be on the same page, but you have pineapple. I don’t. 🙂

  4. G-Man Says:

    MD….
    Let’s get something straight…NEVER apologize to me for playing so perfectly.
    Loved your 55 I like twisted!!
    Thanks for playing…YOU Rock!!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

  5. ayala Says:

    Hard to read… Intense and good write.


  6. When its crunch time, I just write anything that is 55 words too ~

    I like it K ~ Grim but telling of a larger picture ~

  7. brian miller Says:

    dang k….first i love the core of the pineapple…but i would probably kill this guy…just saying….

  8. Mama Zen Says:

    Very well done!


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