National Poetry Month – Day 26 – Posting To The Other Side ( A Dog Poem)

Very pleased with my iPad 2 drawing above!  This one is of my dog Pearl, an old dog but very much extant.  Draft poem of the day below.

Posting To The Other Side

You talk to me of waterfalls.
I think not so much of spray–well, yes, I think of
spray, splash, droplets, glasses bespeckled–
but what I think of most
is this side and that,
the icy flow of everchanging wall, the stillness
behind that wall, and how,
as a child, when my dog died
my first beloved dog, that is, the first
dog who felt truly younger than me, needful of my protection,
I tried, like Demeter, to reach beyond such a wall, to
communicate, as it were, with the other side–no easy task with a canine–
and how, since I was already being mystical, I wrote the dog a letter,
and since I was desperate in my grief, I posted that letter
in one of my Junior Britannicas, a cherry red series of volumes,
under the letter D, praying that the Dog (Deceased)
would find it, and how, for many months afterwards,
I was afraid to open that volume, to retrieve that carefully
folded piece of lined notepaper,
in case it was still there.

All rights reserved.  Suggestions welcomed.  (One question – “retrieved”.  I like it because of the dogginess–but may be “seek” or “look for” would be better?)

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5 Comments on “National Poetry Month – Day 26 – Posting To The Other Side ( A Dog Poem)”

  1. Chelsea lori truman perry Richardson's avatar Jingle Says:

    Pearl is cute,

    if you could not meet the requirement of poets rally, don’t say anything, at times, there are a few doing this, also, feel free to join poetry potluck, at there, you are free and no commenting requirement.

    welcome.

  2. swanrose's avatar swanrose Says:

    My aunt was just crushed from the passing of her dog. I am sure she would appreciate this piece. As I am sure many others would.

    my thursday post was here

    Poem Standing here

  3. C.'s avatar C. Says:

    i like ‘retrieve’ – in all its dogginess. and the logic of a girl who knew enough to avoid ‘Damned,’ and ‘Dread’ and ‘Dastardly.’


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