What
What
It’s the questions of the dead
that stop
my throat.
“Tell me, are my mom and dad
still living?”
the calls almost
to prayer;
“I tried to get Daddy to help me,
but he didn’t hear; I don’t know where
he was–”
“They’re gone, right?” Pause. “Long gone?”
I say, yes,
softly.
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June 6, 2017 at 9:20 pm
It’s hard sometimes to care for an older person. My beagle, Adi, and I were a certified “pet therapy team”. Weekly we visited in the Alzheimer’s wing of an assisted living home. Those residents loved Adi’s coming and Adi loved ‘visiting’ with them.
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June 6, 2017 at 9:23 pm
A note, I had in mind a rainbow being fairly close in. Way before Kansas. I will try to sense how far away others perceive it to be.
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June 6, 2017 at 9:26 pm
Thank you for letting me know of a reader situation that I hadn’t planned. I appreciate your help .
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June 6, 2017 at 11:43 pm
This reminds me when my mother asked this… she is fading away even further now…. heartbreaking
June 7, 2017 at 4:34 am
Lost the first comment — Poetry is best for attenuating the voices of the dead. OK, better at. (You might find better shading in your drawings.) For this reader, it was the voice of a dead inner child here, the one still trying to understand the losses of a life. I hear my kid voice asking what happened to my brother, who too is “long gone.” Great to read you here, Karin.
June 7, 2017 at 5:58 am
Thanks for your comment, Brendan, and for persisting. The first title of this was actually, “still, the child” but it felt a little querulous. Not sure about this title though! Maybe too innocuous! Thanks again. K.
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June 7, 2017 at 6:42 am
Powerful piece!
June 7, 2017 at 10:39 am
Wow! Karin, this tugs at the heartstrings… and your pictures is perfect. It stirs the emotions.
June 7, 2017 at 12:19 pm
Thank you, Kerry.
June 7, 2017 at 1:16 pm
Oh, that ending …
June 7, 2017 at 1:23 pm
Makes me think of my grandmother’s last days.
June 8, 2017 at 7:31 pm
Thanks
June 8, 2017 at 2:11 am
luminous and heartbreaking, K ~
June 8, 2017 at 6:12 am
Thanks. k.