7 Comments on “Something in B”

  1. Jim's avatar Jim Says:

    Nice thoughts here, K. I would choose one with Monet or van Gogh. When I listen closely, I can faintly hear shades of “MacArthur Park.”
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  2. Oh, K, this is yummier than honey. All right, as yummy as the best honey. I love the beats and the breaks, and the fact that the poem puts a smile on my face. 🙂

  3. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr Says:

    Gorgeous. I especially love the bent bee’s knees!!!!!!!!!!

  4. hedgewitch's avatar hedgewitch Says:

    Lots of lovely little plays on words, and a lightness that does seem native to bees and flowers, engaged in their honeyed, humming work. Delightful, k.


  5. This feels like wings in flight….love it!

  6. Helen Dehner's avatar Helen Dehner Says:

    Your poem made my heart soar ~~~


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