“Missives Accomplished”
Missives Accomplished
There is an entwining twirl
in the script of certain centuries, a circlet
of the deliberate that, like the spiked
trim of armor, serves
a purpose beyond the
decorative.
The crossed “S” of Sworn, the ribboned
“B” of Beloved, the Ionic pillar that
leads into Forthwith–an unwinding calligraphy that, like
a curl lodged in
a locket, binds us
no matter how difficult the general flow
of characters,
tethering us to the half-moon brow
soon to be lost in childbirth, the shifting smoke of
gunpowder, the blue-black breast of
a recorded slave, a quill
that once took flight;
even the parchment, like the globe itself,
(or time), refusing to stay flat
and simple,
the swirling letters dark
wicks upon its lanterned waves.
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Agh! The above is my draft poetic offering for Tess Kincaid’s the Mag. Tess posts a picture prompt, and the picture is my version of the this week’s, a painting, Still Life, 1670, detail by Jean François de Le Motte. .
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ManicDDaily 
June 11, 2012 at 4:12 am
Wow, Maniac, your words transported me, so inspired, so full of feeling. So much of you in them . The letters and objects came to life for me, and i was avle to dance with them cor a while, thank you.
June 11, 2012 at 12:06 pm
Thanks so much, Kutamun.
June 11, 2012 at 5:24 am
A calligraphic masterpiece, methinks…
June 11, 2012 at 12:06 pm
Thanks, Jinksy. I really enjoyed yours too. k.
June 11, 2012 at 5:36 am
Stupendous take on the prompt! I am completely blown away by it. Definitely genius level is this!
June 11, 2012 at 12:06 pm
Dave – you are always so kind. Thanks. k.
June 11, 2012 at 5:59 am
haha…did you mean to highlight the BS…that was a nice easter egg hidden in there if so…lol….some really fantastic imagery esp in that last bit on the globe and quill, the blue black breast of slave…
June 11, 2012 at 6:04 am
Ha! I did not. Oops. You are too clever. k.
June 11, 2012 at 6:06 am
So funny – but I did change now as I did not mean it. Thanks! (I’m not sure I want the easter egg in there!) k.
June 11, 2012 at 9:37 am
you are using imagery in a perfect way…this is amazing: even the parchment, like the globe itself,
(or time), refusing to stay flat
June 11, 2012 at 5:49 pm
Thanks. k.
June 11, 2012 at 10:52 am
I love this karin–it evokes the past in such a human way, makes it shimmer up out of the ghosts of human hands, human effort, and stare at us as briefly as a candle flame about to be blown out–so hard to make the past live in a time that can’t be bothered with anything except today’s ‘status update’ on facebook. Apologies for being late to get here–early night last night.
June 11, 2012 at 11:00 am
Ha – not at all. I don’t think I posted this till after midnight or something. Thanks. k.
June 11, 2012 at 11:40 am
i love the script running through your script. so beautifully multi-layered. “tethering us to the half moon brow” captured my heart in this one. lovely, k. ~jane
June 11, 2012 at 12:07 pm
Thanks very much. The whole thing was weaving in and out of my head all day, not quite right, which was why the “agh”. Still don’t know, took out a lot – in my case, that’s just about always good. k.
June 11, 2012 at 1:39 pm
Very much like a treasure hunt. Lovely
Hugs
SueAnn
June 11, 2012 at 2:10 pm
Thanks, Sue Ann. (Hugs back.)
June 11, 2012 at 3:03 pm
A lovely curl through the centuries here…excellent…
June 11, 2012 at 3:06 pm
Thanks, Tess.
June 11, 2012 at 7:45 pm
I like how you focused on an aspect of the image and gave it life and color. I specially like:
the swirling letters dark
wicks upon its lanterned waves.
June 11, 2012 at 8:44 pm
I love how you detailed the old fashioned calligraphy. I think their way of writing in those days was so beautiful, somewhat messy with the ink but, the style of the curves and curls and such was very nice to see. The history you bought into it is wonderful too. The mention of the slaves, gunpowder.
A really lovely interpretation of the pic.
June 11, 2012 at 8:48 pm
thanks so much, k,
June 12, 2012 at 11:06 pm
Everything I would say has been said, karen, is it? This is so lovely and clever and I really love what you’ve done with the artwork …very special
http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/06/love-letters-of-promises-and-regret.html
June 12, 2012 at 11:38 pm
Thanks so much. K.
June 14, 2012 at 6:13 pm
I ‘ink’ this is my favourite one so far!
June 16, 2012 at 12:10 pm
Wonderful words.
And great title, too.
=)