Magpie Tale – Odd Poem on Baldness (“Arched/Domed”)

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This is an odd poem written for Tess Kincaid’s Magpie TalesMagpie Tales. Tess posts a photographic prompt. I prefer to use my own art in my blog, so do my own version of Tess’s photo. And here’s the poem:

Arched/Domed

There is arched baldness and there is domed baldness,
Polished baldness and (simply) overly-shiny baldness,
Smooth baldness and whiskery baldness,
Waxed baldness (hair shaved) and waned baldness (hair receding),
Diabolic baldness and sweet baldness,
Destroyer-of-worlds baldness and lab-scientist-with-oddly-ruffled-
sides baldness.

The sweet (domed) baldness sits above a chest on which
one feels safe to rest one’s head,
While the arched baldness overlooks an
appraising brow.

You may wonder how I know
so much about no-hair.
Wonder on.

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9 Comments on “Magpie Tale – Odd Poem on Baldness (“Arched/Domed”)”

  1. Tess Kincaid's avatar Tess Kincaid Says:

    Bald meets balder…I love it…

  2. David King's avatar David King Says:

    Now that’s really left me wondering…

  3. Elise's avatar Elise Says:

    Very curious now.

    I like your perspective on the range of no-hair-ness.

  4. brian miller's avatar brian miller Says:

    ha…ok wondering on…smiles…i told someone else in a comment i tried bald for a season a few years ago…there are many variations under the dome…smiles. i like that wax and wane line…nice…

  5. zongrik's avatar zongrik Says:

    wow, i love how you turned this into a study in baldness. i also like the artwork.

    days of cohan


  6. Mmmmh – I’m wondering too/ I love the look of some naturally bald men – the shaven head doesn’t quite have the same appeal.

    Anna :o]

  7. Helen's avatar Helen Says:

    Wonderful – I won’t ask. As always, great photo enhancement.

  8. Margaret's avatar Margaret Says:

    ha! fun. And I think Yul is “sexy baldness” 😉


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