Magpie Tales 94– Lunch Counter Painting (Reproduced and Poeticized)

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I am posting this (fresh off the brain and iPad 2) for Tess Kincaid’s Magpie Tales 94. Tess gives a weekly pictorial prompt; this week is a wonderful painting by George Tooker called Lunch, exhibited at the Columbus Museum of Art. (The above is my personal reproduction, which I’ve put up just because I enjoy doing my own and can fit it more to my own post. The beautiful original can be seen at Magpie Tales.)

1960‘s Lunch Painting (George Tooker)

Hunched over lunch
as square as
white bread on
processed cheese, each
in a napkin of his/her own–suit
jacket, collar, sleeves–but
what lurks in the hearts
of the beige people?

My guess–everything.
Don’t discount the
counter, fail to read
between the forehead
lines–rainbows
found even in the surface of
coffee regular; a darker face
sandwiched in, intent on the
same meal, not
alien, not, at least,
in this picture, a
painting.

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18 Comments on “Magpie Tales 94– Lunch Counter Painting (Reproduced and Poeticized)”

  1. Mama Zen's avatar Mama Zen Says:

    What lurks in the hearts of the beige people . . . that is absolutely brilliant!

  2. Rick's avatar Rick Says:

    I’m particularly struck by “Don’t…fail to read between the forehead lines…” To me that is the key to the beginning and end of this excellent poem!

    Rick


  3. we do need to read between forehead. sharp imagery,
    you are quite creative on it.

    🙂

  4. jinksy's avatar jinksy Says:

    I like your beige people better than the originals! LOL


  5. I caught the beige people too and have indeed learned that the interior of people is much larger than seems possible sometimes when you look from the outside.

  6. Marilyn's avatar Marilyn Says:

    I love your line ‘what lurks in the hearts of the beige people’. In the rat race of life we must see the real people.

  7. Tess Kincaid's avatar Tess Kincaid Says:

    Beige people…absolutely…nice write…

  8. brian miller's avatar brian miller Says:

    rainbows found in the coffee regular…nice….everyone blanding in but underneath all unique but at the same time similar as well…


  9. Made me think and interpret on my own… Love it!

    JJRod’z

  10. Tumblewords's avatar Tumblewords Says:

    So very creative and crafted to perfection!

  11. caty's avatar caty Says:

    I love how you look into the heart of the beige people, and not their boring sameness and dull or lack of expression


  12. Perfect interpretation – so much hidden below the surface of those suits.

    Anna :o]

  13. David King's avatar David King Says:

    The question with which the first stanza ends was key for me. Your poem opens up the imagination of the reader. fine work.

  14. Margaret's avatar Margaret Says:

    what lurks in the hearts
    of the beige people?

    Awesome question!

  15. Trellissimo's avatar Trellissimo Says:

    fail to read
    between the forehead
    lines

    Mmm…nice thought…

  16. Isabel Doyle's avatar Isabel Doyle Says:

    fine response to the prompt – good luck with your sales!


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