Memorial Day Weekend- Liquified Whitman
Here is a draft poem for Memorial Day weekend. Did you know that Vitamin B is recommended to ward off bug bites? Apparently, mosquitoes hate the smell.
On the Grass By the Pond
My Vitamin B-infused pee
blends with the blades of yellow-green
below my thighs, like
liquefied Whitman.
Memorial Day Weekend.
First outdoor pee of the season.
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This entry was posted on May 30, 2010 at 2:46 pm and is filed under poetry, Uncategorized, Vicissitudes of Life. You can subscribe via RSS 2.0 feed to this post's comments.
Tags: bare feet in grass, bugbites, draft poem, First outdoor pee of the season, liquified Whitman, manicddaily, Manicddaily pencil drawing, ManicDDaily poetry, Memorial Day Weekend, peeing in the grass, Vitamin B to ward off mosquitoes
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May 31, 2010 at 4:14 am
If ManicDDaily were a TV show, you’d have critics saying you’d jumped “jumped the shark.”
But not me.
Now to stock up on the B vitamins…
May 31, 2010 at 8:43 am
Ha. I have finally realized what the theme of my blog is. It is not “liquified Whitman”!