Winter Sonnet- Trying to Cool Down

Winter Light

Yesterday, I posted a poem “Porch” which was, at least a bit, about remembering summer’s warmth in winter.  Here’s perhaps a truer winter poem, about trying to cool down (emotionally) out in the cold.  It’s a sonnet, written in a Shakespearean rhyme scheme.  For more on sonnets – wintry sonnets, Spenserian sonnets, rhyme and meter in sonnets, click on the links, or check out the poetry category from the ManicDDaily home page.

(Reading note–in my poems, pauses come with punctuation and not, necessarily, at line breaks.    Thanks for reading!)

Winter Light

The corn bent down in broken-spined decay
as she thickly squelched her way to what she hoped
was fresher mind, clear of a stuffy day
spent in a house where all resolve had moped.
In movement, mud, cold, steely winter air,
she sought to shed the skin of that day’s self.
She’d bitched at him;  she knew she wasn’t fair,
but his acceptance of their place upon life’s shelf
tore anger from her ribs like leonine jaws.
It spewed, it spattered, stained everywhere she walked.
She knew regrets to come should give her pause,
but his patient face made self-possession balk.
So she labored through the frozen field of corn
waiting for redemption to be borne.

All rights reserved.  Karin Gustafson.

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6 Comments on “Winter Sonnet- Trying to Cool Down”

  1. WyomingDiva's avatar Wyoming Diva Says:

    Wow – I liked the anger in this. Telling the truth!

  2. Morning's avatar Morning Says:

    powerful, well put.

    🙂

  3. mish's avatar mish Says:

    Powerful and intense … you can feel the conflicting emotions … and the inevitable sense of regret …


  4. I admire the honesty in her. Boy, can I be a right self-centered bitch when it’s not needed. A field close by would do me good!!


  5. very evocative imagery! great take on the prompt 🙂


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