Peaked in Darien–Friday Flash 55

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Today I’m on the train again,
presently entering Darien.
Bum hurts from multiple days in seats–
But bum brain still remembers Keats.
Of Cortez, he wrote (or maybe of his men)–
Surmising, silent, on a peak in Darien.
(On horseback? Mayhap.) But in the end,
my bum bolstered by comparison,
I too peek at Darien.

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Here’s thirteenth poem for April with  55 words written on the train (and based upon John Keats sonnet (about first reading Chapman’s Homer.)  Tell it to the g-man!

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5 Comments on “Peaked in Darien–Friday Flash 55”

  1. David King's avatar David King Says:

    Priceless. Not a bum line anywhere! A triumph.

  2. Luke Prater's avatar Luke Prater Says:

    bum bum bum… hehe … very entertaining. The Keats ref is great

  3. brian miller's avatar brian miller Says:

    smiles…have a fun trip….and def know the feel of a numb bum….smiles.

  4. claudia's avatar claudia Says:

    haha..nice…enjoy the trip k. – train rides always are a great source for poetry as well…smiles

  5. ds's avatar ds Says:

    Ha ha! I’ve thought of Darien CT when reading that poem too : )


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