Some Insist on Living By the Sea – Others Not So Much

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Lorenzo Ghiberti (1430-1508), "Christ in the Storm" (Bronze Relief, The Florence Baptistry)

Some Insist On Living By The Sea

Some insist on living by the sea,
waves, even without the wade of Jesus, soothing
the storm in their souls.  Some sleep
to the shush of a stream; some to the silence
of deep pine.  A few–hardy
types, who harken to the habitual–find reassurance
in the clickety rhythmics of nearby rails.
But I wake today in the sure understanding
that my residential pre-requisite
is a dumpster, or
two, whose persistent groans, extended yaws,
hyena bursts of hydraulics, are scheduled (always)
just a bit too early for my alarm.

I should, perhaps,
feel gratitude–they have followed me so
loyally, these dumpsters (trailed by trucks
and cartage contracts)–from apartment to
apartment, neighborhood to neighborhood,
like a stray (huge) cat that I must feed
(unwittingly) in some forgotten but
recurring dream, where we meet on a midnight
curb–me, with my bags
of recyclables, it
with its deep green mountainsides.
And I do–as my back leans against the wall, as the dove softness
of the hour slips to
sheet level, as everything above
tilts, sprawls, clumps,
like so much wadded detritus–feel thankful, yes,
that, in this particular bedroom, I can’t quite smell
the exhaust.

I’m posting this for dVerse Poets Pub’s “Meeting the Bar” challenge to be in the moment; this prompt hosted by Victoria C. Slotto.

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16 Comments on “Some Insist on Living By the Sea – Others Not So Much”

  1. Mark Potter's avatar Mark Potter Says:

    ‘hyena bursts’ . . Nice poem!

  2. ladynyo's avatar ladynyo Says:

    THIS is an inventive, topical and marvelous poem!!

    One of the best I have read this week…..made me laugh and made me tear up for some unknown reason.

    yes, living in the urban jungle takes an ability to look at things sideways.

    Wonderful!!!

    Lady Nyo

  3. hedgewitch's avatar hedgewitch Says:

    I really like this one, K. It has a lot of cargo, but it dumps it(to borrow your analogy) very lightly on the reader, and the smell is more of a succession of tomorrows than the ripeness of the past. I like the dove line best.

  4. Gay's avatar Gay Says:

    I love this song to urban living. Glad you have found a way to express this integral piece of living small and definitely “in the moment”.


  5. Wow, I love this. Something as banal as a dumpster turned into poetry of the present moment. In Reno, we’re only a mile or so from the train…probably less than. I don’t mind the sound except for the middle of night when it disrupts my sleep. Like your dumpster!

  6. Chazinator's avatar Chazinator Says:

    Thank goodness for the mafia, perhaps? 🙂 I love the way you incorporate so much of you into the poem, which is about the dumpster emptying trucks. Very imaginitive in its description of the machines, hilarious in how they connect up with your everyday existence. Very fun to read, and says a lot about the intricate web of urban life and how it affects how we think and feel.

  7. Margaret's avatar Margaret Says:

    loyal dumpsters. ha I have to say, you are a genius to be able to turn this topic into a beautiful poem.

  8. chamomile tea's avatar Shawna Says:

    Love your alliteration here: “hardy types, who harken to the habitual”

    Awesome sound: “extended yaws, hyena bursts of hydraulics”

  9. David King's avatar David King Says:

    Enjoyed this very much indeed. Refreshing take on the prompt.


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