9th Day of National Poetry Month – Good News, Bad News
Good News/Bad News
And then there was the children’s book
about the man–look!–who fell out of
a plane. That was the bad news.
But, phew! he fell onto a hay stack;
this was, apparently, the good news:
that his back was not broken
through the intervention of
dried grass. But hey! there was
a needle in that stack–
which was the bad news. Except that, wait!
He turned out to have a spare camel
in his pocket which fit exactly through the eye
of that needle–which was the good news!
for it took him straight to, do-not-pass-go to,
the kingdom of heaven, not
so much because he was a rich man
but because the hay stack hadn’t worked that well,
after all, not against a fall from the sky.
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April 11, 2010 at 3:03 pm
I just love this poem especially the ironic ending. The illustration is great!
April 11, 2010 at 4:28 pm
Thank you so much!